I have to disagree - sounds brilliant! No-one likes the hearing their own recordings, but to other people’s ears, it sounds great, honestly! Well done.
Yup, I agree strongly with Siaron! This is an excellent start, well DONE…
I thought that it was a good starting point for someone new to the language. Honestly, I’m in a structured advanced course (Uwch 2) in North Wales and there are one or two who still have accent problems. Daliwch ati / keep at it!
Sounds great. Well done